Namicole, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

*jogging in place* its gonna be here SOON!!!

Waralien, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Here you are the next chapter enjoy:

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 9: Redemption

Ravage awoke in a daze. His vision was blurred and so he didn’t recognize the area he was in. One thing for sure the temperature was very humid and moist. He shook his head clear and realized where he was. Although the room was dim he instantly recognized the place he was in, the hive nest. All around, he saw human bodies plastered on the walls, ceilings and floors. Next to those bodies he saw gigantic eggs. Some were opened some remained closed.
Ravage’s attention then turned to eggs propped next to him. The eggs were unopened but his experience told him that wouldn’t stay that way for long. He tried to move his arms and found that they, along with his legs, were plastered with resin, immobilizing him. Ravage then activated a saw blade where his wrist blades were and cut free his arm. He then continued to his other arm and his legs.
As soon as he began to work on the resin on his body, he heard some screeching. He knew the caretaker drones were coming to make their usual inspection of the nest. If they caught him trying to escape, they would surely attack him. He quickly cut through the resin and ducked behind some pillars in the room. The drones came in making their usual inspections just as Ravage predicted. One thing he didn’t count on was that a Warrior, which was put on guard there, began screeching to the drones about the escaped host.
They reacted quickly and charged to Ravage’s hiding area. Ravage barely had time to fully cloak when they reached his area. The drones cornered the area only to find nothing standing there. They then rounded on the Warrior, which gave Ravage the chance to escape from there. He ran through a passage into another large room but this one was different from the first. Bodies were still there, but many of them had holes punched through them through the chest. Some of the bodies were still under comatose, no doubt containing chest bursters and many more of the bodies had huggers attached to them.
Then something made Ravage stop. There among the bodies was a few of his fellow hunters. He recognized some as unbloods that were hunting here. Others he knew as his fellow blooded hunters. He would have done the honor of rescuing them if they hadn’t already been impregnated. He began counting the holes of each.
“One, two, three, four, five; There are five abominations loose on this hunting ground.†He growled.
He tried to contact his clan but found that something blocked his communicator signal. He looked around at the resin and snorted with disgust. He quickly made his way out of that chamber and into a strange under comb. Upon inspection, he found that this place was located beneath the streets that lay above.
Suddenly something caught his attention. He found himself surrounded by a dozen warriors. He looked at each of them till he noticed one particular warrior. It had features that closely resembled him. Its huge entity was very noticeable as it pushed aside the smaller Xenomorphs.
“The honor of my fallen brethren shall be avenged.†Ravage declared as the towering Predalien approached him.
His wrist blades sprang out as the Predalien neared him. He first swung at the monstrosity’s head. The creature quickly ducked and made a move for his stomach smashing into him. With its strength and size, it forced Ravage from his spot, sending him flying three feet from the ground. Ravage, after landing, recovered quickly from the hit, readied his stance as two Warriors darted to him. Both attempted to pierce him with their tails. Ravage was quick to act and side stepped both lunges. He quickly sliced both tails causing acidic blood to gush out. The hunter, though fast, wasn’t quick to react and the acid made contact with his chest armor and exposing skin.
A thousand different pains shot through his body as the acid ate away at his exposed skin. He quickly tore off his chest armor before the acid ate through it and into his chest. The Warriors were quick to notice his distraction and lunged forward. Ravage activated his shoulder mounted plasma caster in time to catch the approaching threats in mid-air. His caster fired off twin shots, quickly ending the Warrior’s attempt to attack him.
The Predalien finally neared again and tried to take Ravage. This time Ravage was prepared. He retracted his wrist blades in favor for a huge battle sword that shot out of his other gauntlet. As the sword shot out, it hit the Predalien square it the chest causing the alien to screech in pain. The other Warriors quickly reacted to the Predalien’s cry and attacked Ravage. Ravage saw this and quickly pulled out something and swung it over his head.
Instantly several closer aliens where diced up. As Ravage stopped swing his arm, a serrated and jagged chain wrapped around his arm, the chain gummed with Xenomorph flesh. Ravage then pulled out his blade in a sweeping motion. The effect caused the blade to rip out of the side of the Predalien. The Predalien began screaming in pain as blood shot out in spurts. As Ravage regained control of his blade, several aliens attempted to attack him. In one clean swipe, Ravage decapitated the attacking aliens. The Predalien began roaring in anger at the sight of Ravage killing its brothers. It charged Ravage.
Ravage was caught off guard and the Predalien, with its arm, back slapped the Pred with great force. The force knocked Ravage on his back. The Predalien pinned him down. Its strength was unimaginable to Ravage. Its mouth began to open, revealing a sinister looking mouth inside. Ravage just smiled and even sinister smile. The Predalien was one moment pinning the Pred to the floor. The next, it was shot clean up and off the Pred. Ravage got up, his plasma caster was smoking at the barrel. The Predalien recovered and began screaming in pain as it was its arm lying on the floor some ten feet away. It was about to charged Ravage again when it noticed that Ravage was swinging his arm again. Ravage continued to swing till he though the momentum of the chain was enough. He tossed his chain at the Predalien. The chain’s momentum caused it to wrap around the Predalien like a lasso. Another sinister smile spread across Ravage’s face as he jerked the chain.
In one clean motion the jagged chain sliced the Predalien into many chunks. The pieces fell to the floor with a sickening plop. Ravage quickly collected the skull of his new kill. The hunter then turned his attention to the other Xenomorphs that surrounded him. Examining the aliens he concluded that the other Predaliens were not there. He then turned to leave but found that the few dozen aliens had grown into several dozen. Every direction he looked he saw the serpents snaking their way closer to him. He knew his chances for survival were thin with these numbers.
Suddenly plasma bolts fired off in the dark mass that was the Xenomorphs. Numbers of their rank began to fall back into the darkness. Ravage turned to see Avak and another of his clan whom he did not recognize.
“Get down!†Avak shouted.
He fired his spear gun at a few Xenomorphs that decided to take Ravage while his attention was turned. The unknown predator then activated his shoulder mounted guns. Ravage noticed the shoulder mounted guns were not that of normal plasma casters but something much powerful. The guns then shot out twin streams of concentrated heat. These began to incinerate anything foolish enough to get caught by its stream. Blazers Ravage thought. Ravage fell back to his brethren and began to question why Avak came here.
“Why have you come here?†Ravage shouted.
“It is my duty and right to aid my brothers in any way fit. That means even saving one such as you from an unhonorable death.†Avak shot back.
“Well since you’re here, there something you should know.†Ravage replied pulling out the Predalien skull.
“What? What is this?†Avak asked.
“It’s an abomination to our race. There were several bodies of our clan members back in a chamber there. They have already been impregnated.†Ravage recalled.
“How many,†Avak asked.
“Only four remain.†Ravage replied.
“Then we must destroy them too.†The other hunter replied.
Ravage then surveyed the hunter. Besides the Blazers he carried, he had war blade mounted on his arm. He carried a large number of Smart disks. His Combi-stick looked worn and apparently it had been used much in the past. His size suggested that he was still young, but apparently he had much experience with battles and with hunts.
“Who are you?†asked Ravage.
“I am Leandres8.†He answered.
Before Ravage could answer, screeching began to echo throughout the under comb. The sound began to get louder and louder. Several figures could be seen in the darkness. The Predators began to back away from there. They even knew that three heavily armed Predators would be enough of a match to an attacking force of aliens.
“We must regroup; we cannot hold those monsters at bay for long.†Shouted Avak as he and the others began to cloak and retreat.
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Later, on top of a roof top, Ravage began to preach to a gathered group of Predators.
“My brothers, today we have fallen into misfortune.†He began, “Five of our brothers have fallen to the Xenomorph menace. But more, they have created several abominations to our race.â€Â
Ravage pulled out the skull of the Predalien. Every Predator near by roared in anger at the sight.
“We must cleanse our race. We must destroy the abominations and bring justice to our race.†He shouted.
This was met with a roar of approval. Even Bayne forgot the task his elder had set upon him and Ravage. He stepped forward to address the crowd.
“My brothers,†he started, “As Ravage has said, we must put an end to this menace. We must wage war upon the aliens.â€Â
Everyone including the arbiters, who usually don’t favor war upon prey on a ritual ground, began to shout with approval.
“We are with you Ravage and you Bayne. We shall put an end to the menace.†The crowd began to chant.
“Ravage, we must put this past the elder, we must see what he thinks.†Bayne said.
“Of course Bayne.†He replied.
At this Bayne signaled Avak and he threw down a holographic projector. As soon as it activated, an image of the clan elder was projected. Everyone kneeled down at his presence.
“Why have you summoned me?†he asked.
“Elder,†began Bayne, “we have come across a problem during our hunt.â€Â
“Several of our numbers have fallen to the prey.†Ravage continued, “And what’s worse, they have tainted our race.â€Â
He pulled out the skull once more.
“Disgraceful,†the elder began, “in any case we cannot let this abomination go on. Attention all warriors of the honor blades, prepare for the greatest challenge of your lives. Today, you the hunters of our clan will raise arms against this abomination and come out victorious!â€Â
This was met with a roar of approval from the hunters. Even the unblooded looked anxious.
“Today is our time!†the elder preached.
The assembled hunters let out a roar so loud even the dead shook. They activated their weaponry; Wrist blades, Combi-sticks, Plasma blades, Smart disks, Plasma casters, War blades, etc. They activated their cloaking devices and headed out on a death march. They would kill every Xenomorph that got in their way.
This first started as a ritual hunt. Now, now its war.

Waralien, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Here you go the next chapter:

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 10: The Takedown

Valdez and Alex continued to stare at the strange Xenomorph. It did nothing but stand there staring at them with its eyeless face. It took in every detail of them. Valdez was beginning to get unnerved. He never had to go so long without pulling his trigger. Alex was also thinking along the same lines as Valdez. His trigger finger began to itch.
Suddenly the creature lunged forward. Valdez reacted quickly and fired his grenade attachment. The force of the explosion sent the creature and Valdez and Alex flying. Alex recovered quickly and got Valdez up.
“What was that thing?†shouted Valdez.
“I don’t know,†replied Alex, “but here it comes again.â€Â
The monster was approaching their area. Valdez raised his gun and opened fire upon the creature. It began to back away in pain as the metallic bullets as the rounds tore into it. Alex joined too in the firing and the combine attacking force drove the creature into retreating. It jumped up and smashed into the ceiling disappearing from view.
At the sounds of firing, Ana burst into the scene asking, “What’s going on?â€Â
“Some kind of Xenomorph,†Valdez panted, “tried to attack us.â€Â
“Hmm, well it’s gone now,†Ana replied
She ushered them out of the back room and back with the group.
“What happened? What’s going on?†Roger asked he lay on the floor.
“Nothing, we took care of,†he began. His eyes turned away from Roger to the ceiling.
A tail slowly descended from the ceiling and impaled the smart gun female. She began gagging as the tail raised her body to its owner’s face. The creature, from before, opened its gruesome mouth and shot out its second mouth. The result caused the gunner’s head to explode. Blood sprayed everywhere as the creature chucked the girl away from itself.
“Open fire!†shouted Ana as the creature jumped down from its perch.
The only sounds to be heard were the screams of pain from the Xeno and the guns firing. It lunged itself at the nearest marine and grabbed him. It picked him up and slammed him down upon a nearby table. It picked him up once more and with a gruesome ripping sound tore the marine in half chucking the legs out the window and the top half; it threw at Valdez knocking him down.
“Help me! Help me!†ripped marine began screaming clutching at Valdez’s BDUs.
Valdez threw him off and regained his footing. The creature made another attempt at ripping off the limbs of another marine. But before it could do any more damage Ana whipped out a single-man rocket launcher.
“GET DOWN!†she shouted.
She let out a round on the creature. The concussion rocket exploded half of the creature’s body. Acidic blood began oozing out of the wound. The creature was screaming in pain as it gripped its wound.
Roger, who finally got up, pulled out his shotgun and ran up to the creature, he shoved the barrel into the creature’s mouth snuffing the sound it was making.
“Go to hell you one ugly son of a bitch!†he shouted pulling the trigger.
The shotgun went off blowing apart the back of the creature’s head. The body limped off to the side, acidic blood still oozing out, eating away at the flooring.
He walked over to the group, shouldering his shotgun.
“What now?†he said looking at the body.
“Now we strike back.†Valdez said.
Everyone turned to him. He was kneeled down beside the ripped marine closing his eyes and he stood up.
“Ana,†he started, “can you lead us back to the under comb?â€Â

Waralien, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Here it is the next chapter enjoy:

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 11: It Begins

Ana lead the group back to the entrance of the under comb. The group had dwindled to a few numbers. Ana, Alex, Roger, Valdez, and a handful of marines were left. These were all that were left of the attacks they had succumbed to. Valdez was now more determined then ever to get his team off this hell hole. He knew that they would have to go into the hive of the Xenomorphs and eliminate the threat once and for all.
As they went they began to notice that any Xenomorph bodies they saw had their heads cleanly cut off. Valdez guessed that their friends from before were thinking along the same lines as they were.
“Apparently our friends are going to bring the hurt to someone.†Roger joked.
No one laughed. They knew that the conflict to come would be very difficult.
They reached the under comb entrance close to the docks and entered it. As they looked on, they noticed that the creatures had remodeled the place. Resin was plastered everywhere on the walls. Some eggs were placed on the walkway. The entrance they had gone through before was blocked off by thick resin.
Valdez quickly ordered everyone to shoot the eggs. The group raised their guns and opened fire upon the defenseless eggs. After the eggs were cleared they found a hole that they descended down to the flooring below. Here the group noticed that there were no huggers anywhere. This was very strange because this area used to crawl with huggers.
“I wonder what’s going on.†Alex said, examining several old eggs lying in the corner.
They searched the area for any sign of an entrance. It wasn’t until Roger moved aside some resin webbing that he found a passage to another chamber.
“Hey guys, I think I found it.†He called
The rest made their way to the area. The passage was a narrow so they had to go in by single file. Roger led the way followed closely by the marines. Valdez came after with Ana and Alex following close behind. They made their way down the winding passage. It was several minutes later when they finally exited out of the passage. They arrived to a chamber. This one was dimly lit; very large and thick resin covered the walls and ceilings. Bodies were plastered on the walls and along the floor. They continued forward ignoring the large number of bodies that were stacked in a corner of the room.
The group found another passage in the far back of the room. They approached its entrance. But before they moved on forward they saw bodies of the hunters lying on the floor. Each had a hole punched through their chest.
“I guess we know what that thing was from before.†Roger said.
They entered the passage. As they went they noticed that the temperature was increasing. They continued on the path. Suddenly they began to hear screeching and roaring.
“Did you hear that?†asked one of the marines.
“Yeah, I did. Though I wish I didn’t.†Another marine replied.
“What in the world would make that sound?†asked Alex.
“Well I guess will find out.†Ana had answered.
“Everyone move forward. And keep the chatter down.†Valdez ordered.
The group silently moved forward to the exit of the passage. Light flashes were issuing from the exit. They continued to move forward. They arrived to an even larger chamber. Judging how the resin was plastered it seemed that they had come to a chamber that had once served as a containment unit.
Although the surrounding area was impressive what they were watching was something on a larger scale. Xenomorphs were fighting a battle against the hunters. A large number of Xenomorphs were poring out of an entrance in the back of the room. They were trying to attack the hunters who were position on a platform above. Several of them were firing their plasma casters and spear guns at the attacking aliens. Hunters armed only with melee weapons were on their level fighting the aliens in close combat. Half a dozen Predator bodies lay dead or dying on the floor. Aliens were dragging away the dying bodies to await the impregnation. Several times the hunters would call out in a strange tongue. The others reacted to the call and launch themselves into the fight.
The Xenomorphs were not going to bend down and let the Predators just walk over them. A large Warrior began screeching and a wave of drones’ position above the Preds jumped down upon the unsuspecting Preds. Several were successive in taking a Pred off the railing on the level above and dropping them down to their deaths. Warriors, just joining the fight, jumped to the walls and crawled furiously along it. Preds armed with the plasma casters began taking aim at them. Only a few were successful in shooting down the on coming attack. The wave of Xenomorphs hit the Preds hard disrupting their attack plan.
More Preds began to file into the chamber. One Pred armed with Blazers began to fire upon the aliens that broke through their ranks. Another armed to the teeth with weapons was throwing smart disks at the attackers. The disks flew forward slashing anything that got in its way before returning to its master.
To Valdez this wasn’t any fight like he had seen before. This was a war.


Namicole, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

hay dude i got three questions for ya
1. am i gonna be in the story?
2. if so when?
3. how many chapters is there?

DeathWraith, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Lol "You+Pencil+Paper=PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!!" You could power a light cannon enaugh to kill all the Grues with that awesomeness! Actually i think you could kill a Grue even with the sarcasm i just used. Or this last one. Or this one now. Or all of them combined! Yes, that should do it. Sadly you didn`t realise this in time and a Grue ate you.


*** You have died ***

Ok, sorry, too much Zork on Uncyclopedia...

Looks like you`ve been pretty busy with thi thing... I`ll have to read all of it all over again cos i can`t remember how much of it i did read, but i do remember that i liked it, hopefully the rest of it is as good as the part i already read or better.

Leandros8, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

SWWEEET!!!!tnx for putting me in as a very sick pred with blazers and everything.even though u mispelled my name,but fucking hell do i care!?!by the way in the story can my guy be an expert marksman with the shurikens and retrievible discs tnx.by the way someone(can't remember the name of the person)stole my pencil+paper=awesomeness thing.but i dont really care though.but thabnks for the blazers though!by the way you said in the story i was young,well i am only 11 but i think preds are first allowed to hunt at age 13.oh well just say im...like...ummm....talented at birth or something,i donyt know.there just has to be some excuyse for that somewhere,right?anyways tnx man great sitories!i love when the preds declared war because theres nothing better than a full scale all out no holding back total annialation battle.It's ingenious!

DeathWraith, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

i didn`t steal your thing, i quoted it...

Leandros8, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Quoted,stole,same thing.but i dont care quote it all u want.

Waralien, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Ok to answer your questions:
A:Yes I will add your chacter
What do you want to be Namicole?
B:I really don't know but it gets more intense and grewsome as I go.

And again thanks for the support

DeathWraith, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Um... you know... quoting isn`t the same thing as stealing at all. For example, quoting someone`s girlfriend is gay, while stealing someone`s girlfriend is manly. Or, stealing someone`s car will get you to jail, while quoting someone`s car will probably get you to a shrink. Now i will not continue to spam. Thank you for your attention and remember: As long as you are younger than my sister, i am right and you are wrong.

Namicole, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Ill be a Alien =)

Leandros8, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

im 11.and when i said they were the same thing i didn't really mean it.i was kindof trying to say that when i said u stole it i meant u were using it.but i wrote the wrong thing cause total drama island was on and i had one eye on this and the other on the tv.(is this making much sense to you?)any ways let's just put this pointless topic behind us and get on with the rest of our boring,dull lives.

Waralien, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Uh guys I hate to say this but you need to take your conversation about stealing quotes else where. And Namicole, sorry but if I started an alien side story now it will ruin the entire story. If I come out with a new story (which I am) I be sure to include your name in it.

And for you faithful fans here is the next chapter:

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 12: The First Wave

Someone somewhere once said if war is hell then we’re in it. This was one of the few thoughts that Valdez had going through his mind as he witness the battle between the species.
He and his group had just entered a chamber attempting to destroy the Xenomorph menace once and for all. It was a sure fire plan. Go in, take out the Xenomorphs and take the transport ship out of there. Unfortuatly the Predators got there first.
The Predators had waged war upon the Xenomorphs for some reason unknown to Valdez. He and his group had survived much already. They fought a hunting pack of Xenomorphs. Survived an attack by a Predator, and killed a Predalien through teamwork. But now it would take a miracle to survive the battle.
“Incoming fire!†shouted Roger.
The group ducked and weaved as stray shots from the Predator plasma casters, and disks went flying everywhere. Valdez took off to a lower part of the chamber to avoid the stray fire. As he went he took one glace back at the rest of his team. They took shelter behind a pillar of resin in the far back of the room.
A screeching sound echoed nearby. He turned to see three Drones sheltering themselves behind a large clump of used host bodies. At the first sign of Valdez the Drones sprang to life and approached Valdez. Panicking Valdez began to pull the trigger on his gun. The gun was jammed.
He looked down at the gun and then to the approaching Xenos. He threw his gun at the Xenos, knocking the forward one back into the rest. He reached around and pulled out a grenade. Pulling the pin he threw it at the Xenos.
The explosion incinerated the Xenos and sent Valdez flying backwards.
Across the room Roger saw what had happen and tried to run over to Valdez. A Predator, knocked down from the upper layer, fell down in front of Roger. The Predator regained its footing and looked at Roger. Roger raised his weapon to the Predator.
But before anything could happen, another big brute interrupted. A third Predalien surprised them both and lashed at them.
“Go, get to Valdez, I’ll hold ugly and his friend here.†He shouted ducking a tail lash from the Predalien.
Ana lead the rest to Valdez while Roger handled the Predator and the Predalien. She reached Valdez and shook him awake.
“What? What happened?†he said dreamily.
“You plus grenade.†She answered helping him up to his feet.
He reached for his gun then remembered that it jammed and, in panic, threw it at the aliens.
“Crap,†he said un-holstering his pistol.
A whizzing sound flew by and a marine standing behind them was sliced in two.
“What the,†Ana said whipping blood off her face.
A Predator with two blazers was standing behind them holding a bloody smart disk. It was looking at them with great interest. Ana began to raise her gun when Valdez stopped her. He gestured her to remain still and don’t try anything heroic.
Over to the three species battle, Roger was avoiding every thing the Predalien threw at him. After Ana had left to aid Valdez, the Predalien to a sucker’s swing at the Predator and knocked it for a loop. It then turned its attention to Roger. He did everything he could to avoid being hit by its serrated tail. The Predalien launched its tail one final time downward to Roger. He rolled off to the side and the tail sunk several inches into the resin ground. The Predalien began to struggle with the freeing of its tail. Roger pulled out his shotgun once more and approached the helpless alien.
Out of nowhere the Predator snuck behind him and with one swing sliced off his arm. Roger was hit with so much pain it crippled him. The Predator followed through and kicked him it the stomach while he was down. The Predalien freed its tail and pounced on the Predator. It pinned the hunter on the floor a few feet from Roger and his amputated arm. Roger reached for his gun as the Predalien readied its second mouth.
Roger pulled his shotgun from his amputated arm and pulled the trigger. The gun shot off the Predaliens shoulder causing it to roll off the Predator. Roger quickly cocked the gun and aimed for the Predator. He pulled the gun again. The Predator was quick to react but wasn’t quick enough. The gun shot its leg crippling it. Even over all the commotion that was going on, the Predator’s roar of pain was deafening.
The Predalien to the chance and grabbed the Predator. It lifted it up off the floor and began to screech. The Predator pulled something out and stuck it straight into the alien. The alien screeched in pain as a spear shot out of its back. Roger cocked and aimed the gun once more and pulled the trigger. The Predalien fell back as the pellets from the shell tore into its body.
“Roger, you ok?†asked Valdez as he and his group reached him.
The Predator before took more interest in the alien coming his way and left the marines alone. Valdez saw what happened to Roger and hurried as fast as he could to reach his ally.
Applying first aid, Ana successfully stopped the bleeding of Rogers’s limb. Alex and a few other marines were firing upon Xenos who took a liking to them.
“Valdez you might want to hurry up.†Alex shouted popping incendiary grenades at the attacking Xenomorphs.
“Ok team lets move.†Valdez shouted over the roaring of the Predators roaring.
Suddenly the pack of Predators jumped down from the upper layer and took the battle to the Xenomorphs on the bottom floor.
“Everyone move now!†Valdez shouted as the Predators landed close to their group.
But things took a turn for the worse. A high pitch screeching sound echoed in the chamber. The Predators stopped dead in their tracks. The Xenomorphs began to fall back creating a huge mass of black bodies.
Valdez began to wonder what they were doing.

Waralien, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

To all fans of the series, If you want a place in my story please tell me ahead of time. My current area in the story is pretty close to the end.

Leandros8, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

sweet i got huge blazers!nice story though!it was a bit short.well it really wasn't but the way i saw it in my head as a movie it was pretty short.in a movie everything tends to speed by and happen fairly quickly.so ya i guess so.but still it was sweet.oh and i heard another story is coming out by you.that should be something to look forward to.

xenotaris, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

This story is cool just like a movie telling both sides of the story.

alieo, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

I thought it was good Waralien
cant wait to read more of it and see how the predators fit into the story

Leandros8, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

the predators have allready shown how they fit in.oh and very nice story indeed.

Waralien, Xenomorph, 16 years ago

Here it is the next chapter:

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 13: The Second Crusade

Bayne watched as the Predator onslaught ravaged the alien’s weaker ranks. He began to recall when he and his brethren stormed the under comb and began to attack the first of their defenses. No alien was left alive during that attack.
He now watched as Predators before him jump down to the lower level and attack any alien foolish enough to stand in their way. He peered across the battlefield to see what damage his other brethren were doing.
Leandres8 was fighting off several aliens, keeping them at bay with his blazers. Avak was repairing damage to his leg caused by the human who was foolish enough to take him on. Ravage was at the front of the assault leading his clansmen to glory.
Then something made his soul stop. A high pitch screeching echoed in the chamber. He had recognized this screeching. This was the sound of the Queen.
“Fall back! Fall back!†Bayne shouted to his brethren.
His clan guessed why he wanted them to fall back and followed his orders. Bayne surveyed the field once more and saw the aliens forming a tight group around a particular entrance.
“Bayne did you hear that?†Ravage asked finally coming to Bayne’s side.
“Yes I did. Ravage we must get to the Queen to eradicate this menace forever more.†Bayne replied.
Ravage turn to see the aliens forming that same group.
“What are they doing?†he asked.
“This is something new.†Bayne replied, “Something too difficult for our younger ones.â€Â
He along with some of the elder hunters began getting the newly blooded and unblooded hunters out of the chamber. He, Ravage and the veteran hunters would stay to finish the fight.
Avak was finally able to repair his leg enough to walk over to the rest of the Predators.
“What is our next move?†he asked Bayne.
“Those monstrosities are planning something.†He replied back.
He looked around the chamber. Nothing looked out of the ordinary. Though he did not see the humans anymore, everything looked normal. Suddenly something caught his eyes. In a tunnel leading away from this chamber, something was moving, something large.
“Everyone defensive formations,†Bayne shouted as the figure moved closer.
The mass of Predators began to form up in a single line facing the mass of Xenomorphs and the figure moving in the tunnel. Their wrist blades, combi-sticks, and war blades at the ready for anything. The mass continued to move forward.
Suddenly the mass of Xenomorphs attacked the Predators. Leandros8 was one of the few to see the attacking force and sent smart disks flying. The disks spiraled across the battle field creating a wall of disks slicing and dicing the attackers.
“Bayne we have a problem.†Leandros8 shouted over the screeching of the Xenomorphs.
A few Xenomorphs were able to avoid the smart disks and jumped the nearest Predators. One was so successful that it pinned a Predator and delivered a final blow.
This was the final straw. Ravage ran up to the alien, jerked it off the fallen Predator, armed his wrist blades and sent them plunging into the aliens skull. Acid blood shot out and burned Ravage’s hand. He didn’t care about the pain on his hand. He just wanted the serpent dead. He retracted his arm, grabbed the bottom of the Xeno’s head and pushed it up, snapping the neck.
The alien fell to the ground dead and Ravage grabbed another alien who had broken their ranks. This one on the other hand wasn’t successful in its attack and paid costly for its mistake. Ravage grabbed it, picked up off the ground and chucked it into the wall of flying smart disks. Instantly the alien was shredded to pieces.
Ravage let out an almighty roar that echoed loudly in the chamber. The rest of the clan also let out a roar and went berserk. Many Predators whipped out their melee weapons and jumped out at the on coming aliens. Bayne began to notice that there were more Xenomorphs than usual. In fact there were twice as many than before. He began to wonder where they were coming from.
He turned on his electro scanner and viewed the room. He stared in horror as millions of Xenomorphs crawled on the ceiling. He then looked at his position then to the Xenos above.
“It’s an ambush,†he started.
“What was that?†asked Avak.
“It’s an ambush!†Bayne shouted to his brothers.
They turned to Bayne just as the trap was sprung. Hundreds upon hundreds of Xenomorphs fell from the ceiling, screeching and hissing. They descended upon them like rain, thick dark rain. As they landed on the flooring, they pounced on the nearest Predators and proceeded to finish them on the spot.
Bayne began to shout, “Fall back. There’s too many.â€Â
His words were drowned by all the hissing and screeching. He turned to see Leandros8 fighting off four Xenomorphs with his combi-stick. Ravage was whipping out his chained whip and lashing out at the nearing Xenomorphs. Bayne too had to fight off several Xenomorphs with his Plasma scythe.
All around, his brothers began to fall. Several were pinned by the monsters and given a punishing head bite. One Predator was resilient enough to shake off several tail impalements to his body and was helping unbloods to safety. His deed ended quickly as another wave of Xenomorphs pounded them. The last thing left of him was his arm sticking out of a huge mass of hungry Xenomorphs.
One other Pred was firing off his attackers with his plasma casters. Streaks of plasma shot out in the dimness taking out what ever they hit. A group of Xenos saw this and rushed him. One of them jumped at an oncoming shot and exploded. Its acidic blood sprayed out on the hunter burning him severely. The other Xenos that were rushing him pounced on him.
Ravage, Bayne, Leandros8, and Avak were backed to back with each other. Leandros8 was throwing disks that flew through the air slashing apart Xenos. Avak had out twin combi-staffs and was impaling and bashing nearby Xenomorphs. Ravage and Bayne were using their spear guns and firing round after round at the creatures.
“Everyone I have an idea,†Leandros8 managed to say.
“What?†the rest answered.
“I’m going to use the dance of the blades.†He replied.
“Can you?†asked Avak.
“Do we have a choice?†shouted Ravage dicing off a few Xeno heads.
Leandros8 pulled out two, huge, blades. He pressed a button on them and they unfurled into twin disks. With some effort he chucked them into the oncoming attackers. The blades began to spin and circle their thrower’s area.
The Xenos were hesitant to approach but when one did, its head was cleaved clean off along with its torso.
Many Predators who survived the onslaught managed to get to where Leandros8 and the others were. They were badly injured and weary. Many had impalements from tails. In one case, a Pred sported a head bite on his shoulder.
“Keep it up Leandros8.†Ravage told Leandros8 as he helped some of the Preds.
The blades continued to whirl around the weary Preds. Screeching from the aliens continued to erupt. Bayne checked on the ones on the ceiling. They were gone.
The menacing mass in the pathway halted briefly to examine the situation. Its screeching was piercing but precise. At its orders the rest of the Xenos retreated away from the Preds.
As soon as all was cleared, the Preds saw the damage done by the latest attack. The chamber was filled with bodies. Many Predators lay dead on the floor. Many had impalements, head bites and wounds that had crippled them in the onslaught. Most were the blooded but even more were unbloods.
The remaining Predators gathered their fallen brethren and lay them in the center of the chamber. Bayne began to chant a ritualistic hymn to the deceased Predators. Ravage started a fire using a Xenomorph limb and began to burn the bodies. Movement behind them told them that the humans began to move again.
As they watched the bodies burn Bayne began to preach to the remaining Predators, “Hear me brothers. Today is a day of great loss. We have lost many a great warriors. But let this not falter our purpose. We will make the abomination pay for their crimes against our clan.â€Â
Avak then spoke up, “Bayne, our warriors are weary, they cannot go on.â€Â
“Then those who are willing to fight stay,†Ravage spoke, “those who are too crippled go with Avak. Tell the elder our situation.â€Â
Avak reluctantly agreed to take the wounded Preds back. He left Ravage, Bayne, Leandros8, and a handful of Predator warriors in the chamber.
When they left, Bayne turned to the path that the huge mass was standing in. It had left over a while ago. He knew that it had commanded them to return to the Queen for one final stand. He approached the path followed by the rest of the remaining Preds.
They marched through the path with out meeting any resistance. He checked his scanner for any signs of Xeno or human traces. His heat tracker picked up faint trails of human foot prints.
Bayne knew that this would be the final stand between him and the aliens. This would be the final stand for any of them.