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-Bloo-
2013-12-24 01:29:08
Xenomorph
Sorry CH, premature thread bump. Just another question for DW: What's the reason you called it "Dark Blood Organization"? I have a few theories, but if you have an actual reason, I'd love to hear it.

Edit: Does ANYONE know what "Balatu" means?

@Peterson: I hope you don't mind that I'm making your character (as well as several others) older in age. There are two distinct groups of characters, which are separated by age and experience. Yours is in the 40+ group who've all taken part in a world war 20 years before the beginning of the story.

I can explain this in more detail if anyone is curious. It's not in the Art Crap thread.

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DeathWraith
2013-12-24 13:27:02
Xenomorph
I think the reason was that I was trying to make a clan full of the unwanted members - not those who couldn't get into a clan, but those who had left their clans for one reason or another. The "dark blood" was supposed to suggest a tainted reputation. It later also became a symbol for xenomorph-human hybrids, since that's what most of the members were, because the mods were like "yeah, i know this is canon, but my pee-pee stings when i think about it, please stop making me touch my pee-pee, my mommy says i'll go blind". Sort of a "mud-blood" meaning, if you will.

READ THE RULES


A song about me and skull_ripper that I wrote:
"Yeah, uh, yea yeah, uh, yeah, crackers gonna crack yeah, uh, yeah..."
(thats what I have so far hope u like it)
Peterson
2013-12-24 14:03:03
Human
nah its all good bloo.
-Bloo-
2013-12-24 16:23:23
Xenomorph
@Peterson: Awesome. I thought I should let you know that you and TDN have a very dynamic relationship - more specifically, your characters hates his, but you used to be best friends during the world war. You even have matching Forum Names - "Dragon Claw" for TDN, and "Dancing Dragon" for you. Let me know if you want it different.


@DW: Okay, that fits better than what I had. I was thinking "Dark Blood" was actually used to strengthen the difference + hatred between humans and all the monsters that DBO fights, who all have glowing and/or bright green blood. Hybrids actually factor into the story a lot, and so does the DBO.

Your reason for calling it that fits because my version of the DBO is a relatively new government/military organization, and is hated by a lot of other military branches for "not being a traditional military and being full of freaks." There's also a lot of jealousy because it's popular with the public and was formed specifically to counter the rising threat of the Black Goo monsters; it's the only organization to be really effective against them, giving them priority in funding and stuff like that.

It's also the only branch where hybrids are allowed. It also relies on experimental combat tactics/weaponry not conventionally used by others, especially not Alpha Draconis, who hates the DBO the most.

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-Bloo-
2013-12-25 08:53:35
Xenomorph
IMAGE DUMP (If you have slow internet, you need to exit this tab RIGHT NOW)

My humans are still... eh. There are about 7+ of them I didn't upload because I want to redo them. BUT, the ones here are pretty much final, and are major characters in the story.

However, the real stars of this update are the 8 main Predators and the 2 main Xeno types. I actually really fucked up on the Xenos, so... MERRY CHRISTMAS, PREDATORS:

DRONE (Standard):


WARRIOR (Standard):


THE DOCTOR:


PREDATORv2:


CONCRETE HUNTER:


BLACK WARRIOR:


WOLF (Cory):


STALKER:


DEATHDROP:


CETANU/PHONE:


And now for humans. Members first. (The format is Role/Name/Forum Name/Place of Origin or Home)





And now the made up characters (which far outnumber the Member-owned humans, I know, I'm sorry):









As always, let me know what you think, and PLEASE tell me if there's something wrong with your character. Happy holidays, AVPu.

(I'm seriously considering linking to the pictures instead, there's, like, 20 of them, and they're huge...)

Edit: Holy shit, they look worse on the site. Oh well.

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Kirby-Cage
2013-12-25 16:54:02
Xenomorph
Look worse? They look amazing to me. Incredible Bloo, as always, you set the bar higher each time.
Runner of Shadows

THE SPAMMERBORNE



Sub-leader of the Shadow Serpents
DeathWraith
2013-12-25 17:27:13
Xenomorph
There are SOME details about Xeuss that are different in my mind, but I know that our visions can never perfectly match, and since you've probably put a lot more thought into creating an image that makes sense, I'd say at this point he looks similar enough to what I had in mind. If you actually do make comics about these characters, I'm sure the way they look will change slightly from time to time. Anyway, I like where this is going.

Here, have this for your effort.

EDIT: Oh, I guess I should say that I think they all look amazing. Sorry, I'm really not used to pointing out what I like, just what I don't agree with and then assume that you know this means I like everything else.

READ THE RULES


A song about me and skull_ripper that I wrote:
"Yeah, uh, yea yeah, uh, yeah, crackers gonna crack yeah, uh, yeah..."
(thats what I have so far hope u like it)
concretehunter
2013-12-25 18:37:23
Yautja
First, Amazing. Seriously these blew away all my expectations. Really exceptional stuff, I'm incredibly excited for this.

Second, There is a huge gap between the bridge of the Acuna girls nose, and her nostrils. Just abit odd, Beside that i seriously love the character designs!

MERRYCHRISTMAS
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What would Peterson do?

-Bloo-
2013-12-25 19:23:50
Xenomorph
I actually only used a portion of the human characters' portraits for those character cards. I can post the whole drawings if you want, but the most important features are already in the cards because I only drew them from either the waist up or the shoulders up.

@Kirby: YES. I hope I do - it means I'm only growing. If someone DOESN'T like these, that means I can still grow, and that's great because that means I get to draw even more. And thank you. Your character will use the Warrior design up there, by the way.

@DW: It's actually really cool that you like them. I know the actual DBO clan has had a lot of problems in the past, which is one of the reasons I gave them so much focus. Anyway, I'm glad my version of XEUSS is passable. I've always been really worried that you wouldn't like it.

@CH: I'm glad you didn't mention her eyes this time, but FUCK, NOW IT'S HER NOSE. Yeah, I drew her when I was watching a show called "K-ON!," which is about as girly as you can get. I tried fusing the cutesy anime style with my style (she's 15, the youngest character), and I guess I made her nose really small because of that. I'll keep that in mind. It's important that I get her look down because she's really important.

Also, thanks man. MERRY CHRISTMAS.

I hope DD doesn't mind the many changes I've given his mask. I can always revert back to the first way I drew it if he wants.

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Deathdrop
2013-12-25 21:01:42
Yautja
OK, I've got enough anti-cold medication in me to kill the average bull elephant right now, so if there are grammatical mistakes or my post doesn't make sense, that'd be why.

WIth that i mind: I think the new design is even cooler than the old one, I really like the humn character designs, and I agree that the only real problems are a few little facial quirks on some of the humans. Beyond that, this is really looking like something special. I'm not blowing smoke up your ass, either-This is good. This looks really good., and not just in the "leagues better than I can do" way, though it is certainy that.
concretehunter
2013-12-25 21:38:20
Yautja
Can i request that verango pic in 1440x900 with the text "I hate everyone!"

if thats not an ask
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What would Peterson do?

-Bloo-
2013-12-25 22:53:30
Xenomorph
@DD: I'm really glad you like them. And yeah, I hate on my human designs so much just because of those little quirks. I practice endlessly to get rid of them, and they still pop up. I've gotten considerably better since this topic started, but it's frustrating that I'm not as good as I need to be yet. Anyway, thanks man, means a lot.

@CH: It's funny you say that because, in a way, she really does hate everyone.

The cheerfulness is an act, except it isn't. It's like a "becoming the mask" kind of thing. Or, like how a lot of sad people just act happy by default because they've been hiding it for a long time, making the happiness genuine sometimes.

It's like a real layer of thick chocolate icing on a vanilla cake.

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